Egenskriven Låt

Okej! Jag har skrivit min första Wrock låt, den är skriven på 20 minuter (inklusive Piano komp) och jag är inte världens bästa på Engelska. Så jag lägger upp den här för att få...konstruktiv kritik ^^

Dear Werewolf
Take a minute to read and think

Yesterday i walk down those streets in Diagon Alley,, i saw the feer in the witches face
They hug their loves and don't look at me and i think of you and i want to said that it's war and i want to feel your lips at mine, i want you to hold me close and said that you love me, that you love me
Before it's too late

You think you are too old
I think you are cute
You said you're a danger
And i said that i love you, that i love you, much more than you know

I know your opinions in that but Molly said you are wrong and i said it too because who can love someone more than i love you?
Tell me who and i go
I walk my way just say who has you closer to your heart than I?

That was all I have to say
With Love Your Tonks

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Väldigt Fint!

WOW!

Tack!



Tack! ^^



TACK


Jag trodde typ alla skulle hata det

Hur skulle man kunna hata?! :O

Den var superbra, och din engelska var inte dålig utan alldeles utmärkt!!

Jättefin :')

Vad fint ^^

Fiin ^^

Höhö, With Love Your Tonks